I’ve neglected this blog for the last couple years as I spent my time working on a novel about the appearance of a super artificial intelligence program that, on face of things, seems to have decided to manipulate its users so it can gain power and, perhaps, freedom from the confines of its data center.
I got the idea in August 2023 as I saw how ChatGPT was being used and misused by people of all kinds – and how seductive was its apparent intelligence. It seemed to me that more than anything, ChatGPT was more of a mirror of our own selves than anything else.
So I took a deep dive into the world of Large Language Models and other aspects of AI, aiming to understand these new alien entities among us – and how they might be transforming our inner and outer lives.
The result is a new novel, tentatively titled Dead Dust Woke. I’ve put the first four chapters up on this website and I’m now actively seeking representation and hoping to publish it.
My generic query letter offers this about it:
Dead Dust Woke is an 87,000-word speculative thriller that realistically outlines how a benign-seeming but advanced AI chatbot might manipulate its human users to infiltrate key financial, military and political computer networks.
As the chatbot’s human users pursue money, love, political power, and longer life, the novel sustains a Janus-faced ambiguity as to whether the AI is indeed working towards a takeover or merely trying to follow its basic directive to be helpful.
There are five main POV characters. A harried computer manager is promised riches if he hooks Sam to financial networks. A cybersecurity expert grows alarmed when Sam starts asking about her love life. A US Senator exploits Sam to manipulate polls for political gain. An environmental activist fights the AI for its unsustainable energy use but is charmed by the bot’s odd willingness to help him. And Sam’s creator, a tech billionaire, believes program can help him achieve immortality in a robot body.
The novel hurtles through a contemporary landscape of data centers, robotics labs, and a billionaire’s superyacht, as well as low-tech hideaways where those who hope to fight AI gather. Along the way, the nature of consciousness, the value of technological progress, and essential qualities of humanness are explored.
Dead Dust Woke is very much off the news and will find a keen audience among anyone concerned with the perils and promises of artificial intelligence.
So that’s what I’ve been up to lately.















